Trance music to this by Coventry drummer and producer Jim Pryal - on his Culture Fuzion My Space
Nightfall in Sorrento
Performance poem by Trev Teasdel July 2007
Sorrento -
The Communion of the urban puzzle
Where elegance is attitude
The fashion club of the urban groove
eco-driven
citizens.
In slender tones
of mobile silence
Nocturnal spiders
In basement bars
Live the lust
Of the selfish-gene
In Sorrento
.
Spin-doctored money blenders
With hidden agendas
Crammed with fruit
In the cave of clones
Lie low
in Sorrento
In the wah wah cadence
Of Sorrento radiance,
re-mortgaged estate Agents
with Vintage Bentleys
sway in the breeze
to nightfall’s synthful,
sassy jazz
Glow-worm leprechauns
In dust-down
Denim delights
Ageless
And jazz-hot.
Hide behind enemy-lines
In Sorrento.
Nightfall in sorrento
The civil disobedience
Of a New Era
The world in one city
Refuelled and
air-cooled -
Adidas pre-Raphaelites
On a full-english
cutting edge
Predicting a riot in
The chic -chill-out
Of a power-pop city.
The Revlon
Accurist
With pipe smoking planes
In his own back yard
Sails his Skintight riverboat
In the
shimmering waters of Sorrento
.
Escaping
The chaos of
A goose-pimpled
Colditz
With his third wife
escape plan
from the regional assembly
Of the Cantebury tales
Lost in Sorrento .
Midsummer night Dream-time
Astro-bars in Sorrento
Robert Frost fashion-brands
Follow the universe
less travelled by
.
She was a trainee with a code name
Sleeping with the saints in Sorrento
Dark textured
With age defining make-up
The full
Glamour and scandal
On DVD
Eagerly awaited
The king of contenders
Hot toasted and out to sea
On another public art project.
Dizzy in the city with
Calvin Klein moth-repellent
Paying lip-service to high drama
In the urban puzzle
She’s like art in unexpected places
Soft-spoken
Sky diving
Sun-fresh
Sensitive
Sexy, suave
Stealing the show
On the soft silken routes of Sorrento
On the soft silken routes of Sorrento.
this is beautifull trev. I do not have the ability to recount in words the xperinece when I read this, yet I can say that it conjured up images that otherwise would not have been there, and It has insishght to............YES. yehaa is good description actually.
Posted by: Dave Birdsall | 07/25/2007 at 06:45 AM
Thanks Dave a few lines went missing when I saved it - Sorrento in partic - so have put them back in now (Gremlins). It's more of a surreal metaphor for modern living (suggestive rather than real rather real as I've never been there!) - so it's good it conjoures up your own images and interpretations. That's interesting to hear you say that - and how fast were you - I only just uploaded it!!
Posted by: Trev Teasdel - Songwriter | 07/25/2007 at 07:02 AM
Great poem Trev. I really like the words. Modern living a la catwalk!
Posted by: Jim Pryal | 07/27/2007 at 12:31 AM
Thanks Jim for the feedback on the poem. I'll get to try it out at a couple of gigs in August in Stockton and Harrogate.
Posted by: HOBO - Coventry Music Magazine | 07/27/2007 at 03:16 AM
[this is good] I really liked the rhythms and images - I felt like I was in a complex, multi-leveled city that was as much inner state as a place. I stumbled on the word 'leprechauns' though because it I felt out of "place" to me. Thanks for posting this beautiful poem.
Posted by: Joy | 08/14/2007 at 09:25 AM
Thanks Joy for that feedback - I think that's the idea behind more or less. I was trying to create something that was more visual and impressionistic rather than something with a linear meaning and was both an inner and outer landscape at the sametime. So I guess it worked from that point of view.
I think I felt the same about the leprechaun at first - but I liked the juxtaposition of glowworm and Leprechaun and I think it somehow fits in that fashion and wealth are somehow themes in this and glowworm leprechauns suggests to me people dressed up brightly - but there's no much depth there.
Posted by: Trev Teasdel - Songwriter | 08/14/2007 at 03:40 PM